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Travel to Gnathia by Tori-Fan Travel to Gnathia by Tori-Fan
Yeahh my two last OC! X3

Im wondering if i should try for something with more color, and less sketchy? Any advice? you would see an other version? ^^

Don't hesitate to tell me!

It was a try also for color and for composition, wanted to try to do some "cover" illustration :3
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Lamb-Charmer Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
It have nice, warm feeling ;)
Characters proportions might be a little off, but (again) coloring makes it plain awesome =P
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Tori-Fan Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you so much againnnnnn ^0^

indeed i have still a lot to learn about anatomy and such :3!

Buttt thank you for critic, it make me realize, taking distance with my drawing and being able to improve! :3

Thank you really a lot! ^0^ (also those are the two hero of the project where Theliane appear!^^ )
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Lamb-Charmer Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
Well, no need to thank me =P

Anatomy is rather easy so it should not be a problem for you :)

You improve with each new drawing you make. That's why drawing is so fun :D

Hmmm so the girl here isn't Theliane?
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Tori-Fan Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks a lot i'm glad if can notice that i improve, i have lot of fun drawing and getting some self confident so ^^ !!! ^0^

Nah i know she look like Theliane but it's not her, i have difficulty drawing char different, even more since i decide this girl would have red hair before create Theliane XD!

i posted a try of comic page (it's a wip though ^^ need to color and redo typo :3) with Theliane and those two hero :3

if you want to see^^ [link] !
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Lamb-Charmer Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
Hmm, change her hairstyle maybe? I thought it was Theliane becouse of the goggles though :)

The comic page looks really good :D
It's awesome that you have the courage to put it up (I remember I've done one like 4 years ago but it was bad XD)
If you post up more then be sure to let me know ;)
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Tori-Fan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah i thought about this, but i'm not sure i want to change those hairstyle, i have to think about : < Somehow when i draw a char of me, i have to struggle for make me change the anatomy/face/hairstyle : <

Thank you for comic page! ^^
I think myself this comic isn't good, the blabla is cheesy and voila, dunno, i just put heart on so thought people who follow me would have seen it, also it's first time i make character speak and interact like this on a full page/scene, so i wanted share it^^

But you should post your comic page too, it's so interesting to see char being alive on some page! ^^

I doubt i'll do lot more of comic page for now, i try to think about maybe start something in january, i still try to think about .. will see^^

thanks for your interest : ) it give me courage!
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Lamb-Charmer Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Well practice is the key ;)

It looks good.
The blabla XD can be corrected if you dont like it.
It's great for your first comic.
Waiting to see more :D

Nah, I got rid of it with most of my older drawings.

Don't force yourself ;)

No problemo =P
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Tori-Fan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
haa :( this is too bad you tossed old drawings ._. .. even more serious project like comic ._.;

have to sketch the second page, who show the famous gnathia city, but let's say i decided to focus on something else for now, so will prolly take sometime ^^...

but thanks a lot for cheer! : )
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Shamusu Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha nice ! Moi j'aime bien ce genre de colo, ça va bien au côté "steampunk" je trouve ^^

Masochiste du détail XD
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Tori-Fan Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
hihi merciiiiiiii ^0^

j'aime bien le coté sketchy, mais bon c'était pas mon idea de base donc je me demande si je devrais pas partir pour un truc plus bha, "coloré normallement" (mais bon on verra!^^)

Merci en tout cas!^^ (jamais assez maso 8D)
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tamtu Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
This is cute! I'd give a more elaborate crit, but work is lame and boring and busy T.T
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Tori-Fan Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! <3

Courage for workkk >0< ! /cheeerrr! thank for taking time to let me comment *^^* always apreciate !
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